Great Writing Victor

This is the introduction to Victor's narrative story, Me Being Me. Victor has clearly hooked the reader with his descriptive language and is painting a picture in the readers mind.
Well done Victor on some excellent writing.

The moon emerged from the dark ocean, and hovered into the shaded sky,  radiating its pale glowing face to the world. It’s reflection shimmered on the gleaming surface of the lake in Quetico Park. The roots of the towering pine trees clutched on the drenched soil, the numerous dazzling stars were displayed on the boundless sky. The view brings great pleasure in front of my eyes, but I will never go there again.